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Post by Los Tha Don on Aug 10, 2006 19:24:19 GMT -5
Aight, 1 round only, 16 bars... It doesn't matter who goes first, you have until the 20th to decide amongst yourselves and post it.
Let the BATTLE begin!!!
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raezah
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Post by raezah on Aug 19, 2006 11:37:06 GMT -5
look tek.. u see me u better jet/ nobody recognize u jus cuz u got a lil swaga in ya step/
and if u dont keep quiet ill take that step from u/ like pull out ma blade and take ya ankles from u/
pull out ya chain and take them samples from u/ and pull out ya dame, just to make an example for u/
cuz tek.. ill punch u in ur mouth.. u lookin like josh howard/ and then plant u in the ground... no i aint talkin to flowers/
ima wave of punchlines.. matta fact u drown in ma flood/ i made him rock ALL RED .. and we all know he aint a blood/
i put fear in this kid he screamin 1 thing/ ma royalty is great.. tek bowin down to his king/
matta fact... he aint bowin... cuz i could make him kneel/ otherwise i cud put a gun to his head make him lie wit spread arms like a seal/
yo Los gime the V cuz evrybody lookin at me HALT/ i got a pussy for ma 1st round.. so ill win by default
( not even TRYING)
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Tekre
Foot Soldier
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Post by Tekre on Aug 20, 2006 0:03:02 GMT -5
you came with straight played shit, so not one voter's claimin you'll take it, you could be the star tab next to history n still wouldnt be favourite,
you're stressed n ya necks tightened coz when it comes to rhymin im enlighted, i beat you once n caught you bitin so no wonder you're sorta frightened,
you know you're dead right? you wack fag frontin like what you said tight, floor you from punches with less hits than elderly pornagraphic websites,
when it comes to killin please, no one is as ill as me, fuck six deep i bury this geek the same feet as a millipede,
i exposed you bitin so you got mad at me but actually, raezah you shit outta luck better check ya toilet for rabbits feet,
i'll leave him in more pieces than a hundred hippie greetings coz this geeks frail, (peace) please this battle's more of a shore death for raezah than beached whales,
my bars are harsh truth so you'll avoid these with ya abely devoid schemes so the next round'll have no raez like lazy employees,
i don't even need 16 to beat you
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raezah
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Post by raezah on Aug 20, 2006 2:41:28 GMT -5
only good line lmao
my bars are harsh truth so you'll avoid these with ya abely devoid schemes so the next round'll have no raez like lazy employees,
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raezah
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Post by raezah on Aug 20, 2006 7:18:34 GMT -5
"i don't even need 16 to beat you " probably cuz u couldnt even think of nuthin else to say lmfao
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Post by Los Tha Don on Aug 20, 2006 9:54:40 GMT -5
cuz tek.. ill punch u in ur mouth.. u lookin like josh howard/ and then plant u in the ground... no i aint talkin to flowers/ yo Los gime the V cuz evrybody lookin at me HALT/ i got a pussy for ma 1st round.. so ill win by default ( not even TRYING) LOL, all I could picture is Josh Howard's big ass grill... started laughing... your closing was good too... Raez your diss probably would sound better on audio where Tekre's probably couldn't be put to a beat... but that's why it's a TEXT battle homie... You mentioned about your "punchlines" when you didn't really pack too many at all... you coulda tried using more metaphores and multis... you had a few similies but they don't do as much damage...
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Post by Los Tha Don on Aug 20, 2006 9:58:26 GMT -5
you could be the star tab next to history n still wouldnt be favourite, floor you from punches with less hits than elderly pornagraphic websites, raezah you shit outta luck better check ya toilet for rabbits feet, please this battle's more of a shore death for raezah than beached whales, my bars are harsh truth so you'll avoid these with ya abely devoid schemes so the next round'll have no raez like lazy employees, i don't even need 16 to beat you Overall had alot more metas and multis. You were killin him on your follow up bars mostly, playin off the rhyme in your first line of the bars... that aside, you could have used the last 2 bars to play off something he said in his post... would have made it more "TKO" style... Beached whale ish was tight fuh sho...
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raezah
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Post by raezah on Aug 20, 2006 10:02:33 GMT -5
thas truu... thanks for the pointers too...
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Post by Los Tha Don on Aug 20, 2006 10:02:49 GMT -5
BATTLE SCORE:
MULTIS= Tekre METAS= Tekre SIMILIES= Raezah PERSONALS= Raezah OPEN= Tekre CLOSE= Tekre
Was close but not close enuff for u Raez... TEKRE WINS.
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raezah
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Post by raezah on Aug 20, 2006 10:03:21 GMT -5
tru... rspx
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raezah
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Post by raezah on Aug 20, 2006 10:03:42 GMT -5
goodluck in the nex round
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Tekre
Foot Soldier
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Post by Tekre on Aug 20, 2006 13:55:00 GMT -5
i didnt want to play off his verse coz that woulda gave me an unfair advantage
thats the rules i always play by when battlin
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